Just done a really quick draft of the story board, just so I have something to actually present for the pitch in the morning. Will definitely review and redo the story board after the pitch in the morning.

1. shot of the village
2. short from alley point of view
3. boy running by
4. shot from top of stairs downwards
5. boy runs down
6. -||-
7. shot from the bottom of the stairs from a distance
8. boy runs towards camera
9. camera turns as boy passes the camera showing the boat

10. boy runs towards boat
11. boy gets on
12. boy plays about
13. dozing off, sky turning dusk
14. sleeping, night time
15. camera pan around the boat
16. wave splashes boat
17. inside the boat
18.boy wakes up



19. Yawns as he head towards the front
20. Surprised by the view
21. Pan out of view
22. going under the bridge
23. view of a part of the city
24. looking at other areas
25. slowly heading towards the city
26. boats gets closer to land
27. he gets closer to land

The first half may not be used but personally I think the story wont hold as much of an impact without showing the fact that the boy lives in some awful village where its just dull greys, browns and trees, and as he runs to the boat hes really excited to actually get to the boat

UPDATE- the pitch could have went better but consider i woke up with a sore throat and only had a week to come up with the necessary stuff to worth pitching it was the best of what i could make it